November 05, 2012

Y'Get Me?

There ain't no rock, there ain't no clock
can tell me what to do
Don't pity what you don't know
until you've seen it through

There ain't no saint, nor no complaint
can change this mind of mine
Don't tell yourself 'I couldn't
as I haven't got the time'

There are no walls, no tumble-falls
removing any grace
But I conquer just to wipe away
that smug look from your face.    

pst........I am aware that I've grammar mistakes but it's how this heroine goes!
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15 comments:

Berowne said...

Nice rhythm, nice meter, nice rhyme.

Tess Kincaid said...

She does look quite smug...

De said...

Fan.Freakin'.Tastic.
I want to hear this sung.
What a wonderful voice for this smug girl.
LOVE it.

de
whimsygizmo.wordpress.com

Helena said...

Thank you. I guess she does look a smug conqueror.....!

Hey Monkey Butt said...

Awesome! :)

ReBelle said...

Yes, Ma'am!!!

Daydreamertoo said...

Who put the reins in her hands... lol
Very clever photoshop
She's got sass... clever gal.

Carrie Burtt said...

Loved this Lena!!

Little Nell said...

I get ya! Loved the rhythm and rhyme of this one.

Karen S. said...

Such a song sung song! Very nicely put together.

Steven Cain said...

Fierce.

Sue J said...

She knows her own mind. Love it!

Hausfrau said...

The bad grammar makes it just right!

~T~ said...

Good tough-girl poem. Nice!

Bee's Blog said...

I love your poetry but don't visit often enough. Come January I'll have all the time in the world so you'll see me here regularly!