I think I'll sink
into a jar of water
And read instead
to save on lead
at Dictionary Corner.
Can't find the words,
it's too absurd
for what I'd like to say, so
I'll engross myself
upon this shelf
and wile away the day
Don't think I'm rude,
because I'm nude
it makes me calm and mellow
Just leave me there
without a care
until the water's yellow!
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29 comments:
I'm thinking he's hiding in plain sight. But with out soap to camoflage he'll have to exit to the loo.
rel
very clever! hahah!
Very neat, and I loved the last line! But is he naked? He seems to be wearing boots.
Fun. I love it :)
Haha and Eeewww.
You can count on me to change the water if it's yellow.....
What happens when the water turns yellow? Are you no longer mellow?
So funny! Some lovely rhythms and rhymes too. I like the header go your blog.
Rel - As a true gentleman would!
Kathe - couldn't be grown up this week either!
Frances - thank you. But I'm pretty sure that guy's in the noddy!
Tigerbrite - ta's!
Thingy - I've flushed too many men's doings in my time!
Jon - Ahhh! Another true gent!
Richard - No Richard - you've pissed in it...!But....some may still be mellow.
Little Nell - glad you liked it - and the new header. That's me just got round to getting rid of the New Year one.....*shame*
Oh hee!
haha yep def need someone to change the water every once in a while...lol...funny touch there in the end...and you know a place like that might not be too bad you know...
lol. Very fun write. Great tone. Thanks
Brilliant!! :D
You deserve a putty medal for this gem! lol
Charming rhyme, creative concept ~ I like this!!!
Clever all the way through...hilarious at the end! Vb
Very cute and imaginative
now tell me where can I buy me a nice man in a jar like that one? I think I will buy me a whole box :)
Awesome rhymes
Lovely rhythm and rhymes... and funny...
That's really witty... Lovely read! Thanks for stopping by my post... :)
Bonza poem :-).
If the water is yellow, someone else will have to deal with him!
A touch of gold I am ready to give all for you to enjoy
The yellow water is a surprise but inevitable end to his adventure . .
Ah ha. this poem really is just your cup of pee/tea!
Oh dear! I'm watching out for that guy. I love your story re the park. I live in NYC so we are all required to pick up after our pooches. K.
Cool....
Really? Until the water is yellow? Completely and utterly yellow? Not yellow'ish? Wow. You are rad!
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