for I have taken all I can
Your menial and pitied grace -
made one think of a passing place
And when the cracks began to show
some furious, some too damned slow
Pretence in all it's firm embrace -
drew out for me a passing place
Forgiveness in the plural sense
hacked at my heart and confidence
Too many lines there to erase -
except a curving passing place
Time won't heal nor make you see
the damage you have done to me
No silence due, no touching base -
I've mapped out my next passing place
I'll always love you, sure of it
but we longer click and fit
The only way for breathing space -
drive straight towards that passing place
Now I'll give you a wider berth
to find me on this huge green earth
You'll only run a loser's race -
while I'm parked in my passing place
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Another rather sad one this week. Altogether now aaaaaaaaah....choooo! Won't be long until humorous Helena's back. She can't stay away. Oh, and it's Music Monday/ Tuesday Tunes time again. I wished you guys would join....my iPod's gagging for it!.......Quick Sticky Bits
7 comments:
A lyric full of resolve and strength. There is a measured and calculated rhythm to it that is quite cautionary. I try to behave, and I sure like your writing.
I like your rhymed and metrical work, rare in these "free verse" days.
Wonderful words here...words of healing and moving on...
I hope you find your way back into the right lane.
I sung this in my head...hymn-like...
Like the Train Station in the Matrix, Train Man , a liminal zone , this, cheers
Really like what u have done here
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