February 05, 2012
Greta's Garnet
They parted from circumstance, danced on the line
A beauty in red, fooled by travel and time
A promise to her in her winter visage
A figure that showed in his future mirage
Seas flowed with crimson, shores tinged with pink
Time trading years in no more than a blink
Each with a garnet, stamped with return
As long as the heart beat, then so would the yearn
Old age took hold, at the table she'd sit
Cutting the seeds from a pomegranate
And her stone still continued with crisp, vibrant spark
As guided out Noah, when it became dark
Death took her hostage, and his she became
As she sang on her deathbed her lost lover's name
Of course he'd still find her, her garnet displayed
From the hands of her youth, and their stone from the grave.
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This begs a tune! It would sing really well.
I'll fetch me guitar, Dick!
Yes, I totally agree...these are lyrics!
...all I need is a riff, a middle eight, possibly an outro - and I'm laughing......
ah def lyrical and i hope that they do find each other once more...smiles.
Such longing ...
Beautiful tribute to undying love.
rel
I have to agree, the 'lyrics' are written and read effoertlessy ... brilliantly done!
Super for a song.
I love lyrics and I love this post. It is begging a tune. Don't let this little gem become a hostage of death without becoming a song. Thanks for sharing. =D
nicely done...thanks for sharing
I agree! I hear this as music. Gee, I wonder who could sing it? Hmm...
Oh,my! A challenge on my hands here. Not the usual type of song (undying love) I'd be writing, but I suppose I could try a chord or two and see what flows........you have been warned......!!!!!!!!!!
You sing the melody, and I'll supply harmonies! LOL
I enjoyed the flow, the rhythm and rhyme of your Greta's Garnet.
musical stuff is always welcome.
excellent magpie.
**** she must if she must.....by the weekend ****
I love the way you kept the red imagery running through the poem like a thread - even the pomegranate - excellent!
I can hear the accompaning music now-lovely words
Lovely images you have captured with this Magpie, Lena. And yes, I'll listen to the song when it comes out.
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