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Meetings by the underhand.
Perfect groups in perfect style
If you don't fit - they will revile
Clinks of glass, to please the clique
The same tobacco brands they seek
Slunk away in woodlands heart
No harder heartbeats to dispart
But pity them, for all is lost
Once icy minds start to defrost
Just take a step back, leave them to it
It's their choice and so can screw it
All to pieces, sweet hereafter
Vanishing with wanton laughter
Poor fine examples of the screen
Those courtesans of magazines
I don't usually lean so heavily on the picture or information about it, but I'm a rather lazy
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ps....I also hang around These Fun Parts
17 comments:
But pity them, for all is lost
Once icy minds start to defrost
... and yes, it happens eventually.
Always delightful...
You are good when in a lazy mood.
Love it.
"For all is lost"...say it isn't so! Love this "movie"!
Now, if that's lazy, words fail me! A very enjoyable read.
Clever and rather subtle...
"Once icy minds start to defrost"...I love it.
Love the confrontational way you began this poem .. and kept going and going!
Oh well done! I like the angle you've taken here.
Clinks of glass, to please the clique
The same tobacco brands they seek
.. And I remembered my good old friends. We never got the chance to hang out again. Busy lives. Thanks for the tour back.
Definitely did not do the 'magazines'; our group was very loosey-goosey! : )
"courtesans of magazines"
perfect
=)
Delightful spell !
I love the punchy start and the misery that follows when people struggle to fit in.
Vanishing with wanton laughter...
What a fine writing,Delightful.
I like the way you opened your poem, but I really loved the fine print at the bottom! That made me laugh!
Excellent! Once again you've triumphed when I couldn't even get going!
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