Come outside, dare oily puddles,
paint some love across the sky
Cast away the rainbow's beauty
feel the magic of her cries
Cleaning corners of the mindset,
little children hurry by
Car engines roast in mid Atlantis,
hailing down from heart and eye
Worries soaked through, sighs diluted,
city building, way too vain
We use the ferrule of umberellas
to burst through clouds and bring the rain.
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17 comments:
Love it :)
"We use the ferrule of umberella's
to burst through skies and bring the rain." What a romantic image!
A bit of poetic creation that's lively, spirited, very entertaining.
Wonderful notion of painting the sky with love...
Poke a cloud with your umbrella and make it cry? Hehehe! I like it.
I'm thinking I have to go out and purchase a "huge" umbrella! Delightful.
Charming. And I like your little added heart on the prompt pic, too.
=)
Just as refreshing as your extra raindrops.
Delightful, particularly the image of the ferrule bursting the sky to bring the rain.
Doria - thanks honey. And thanks for welcoming me back so soon!
Stafford - ahhhhh, I'm just an old romantic/fart* at heart! I actually meant 'skies' to read 'clouds' so I changed it just to be awkward (and less repetitive, repetitive, repetitive........
* delete as applicable
Berowne - thank you - although it wasn't a patch on Ellen and Bob!
Tess - much appreciated. I'm gutted that I missed the Ball. Still going over the attendees' reports! All good!
Jinksy - I'd love to give a try for real! LoL
Helen - the spikier the better!
Sue - ah, thankyou! I try to mark the MT posts with a hidden magpie, too!
Rinkly - thank you for commenting. Always nice to hear from you!
Doc - many thanks.
So sexy and romantic! Love it!
Felt very lilting to me, a fine spirit you have created
What a perfect storm you've conjured here...of course I've got Sandy ( romance too) on my mind!
Paint some love across the sky - such a great line!
Bellissimo.....!
What a lovely write and a nice first one that I read coming here!
Perfectly captured.
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