October 29, 2012

In Torrents

Nice to be back, just gutted that I missed Willow Manor Ball.....*sigh*



Come outside, dare oily puddles,
paint some love across the sky
Cast away the rainbow's beauty
feel the magic of her cries

Cleaning corners of the mindset,
little children hurry by
Car engines roast in mid Atlantis,
hailing down from heart and eye

Worries soaked through, sighs diluted,
city building, way too vain 
We use the ferrule of umberellas
to burst through clouds and bring the rain.

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17 comments:

Hey Monkey Butt said...

Love it :)

Stafford Ray said...

"We use the ferrule of umberella's
to burst through skies and bring the rain." What a romantic image!

Berowne said...

A bit of poetic creation that's lively, spirited, very entertaining.

Tess Kincaid said...

Wonderful notion of painting the sky with love...

Jinksy said...

Poke a cloud with your umbrella and make it cry? Hehehe! I like it.

Helen said...

I'm thinking I have to go out and purchase a "huge" umbrella! Delightful.

Sue said...

Charming. And I like your little added heart on the prompt pic, too.

=)

Rinkly Rimes said...

Just as refreshing as your extra raindrops.

Doctor FTSE said...

Delightful, particularly the image of the ferrule bursting the sky to bring the rain.

Helena said...

Doria - thanks honey. And thanks for welcoming me back so soon!

Stafford - ahhhhh, I'm just an old romantic/fart* at heart! I actually meant 'skies' to read 'clouds' so I changed it just to be awkward (and less repetitive, repetitive, repetitive........

* delete as applicable

Berowne - thank you - although it wasn't a patch on Ellen and Bob!

Tess - much appreciated. I'm gutted that I missed the Ball. Still going over the attendees' reports! All good!

Jinksy - I'd love to give a try for real! LoL

Helen - the spikier the better!

Sue - ah, thankyou! I try to mark the MT posts with a hidden magpie, too!

Rinkly - thank you for commenting. Always nice to hear from you!

Doc - many thanks.

Lolamouse said...

So sexy and romantic! Love it!

Kutamun said...

Felt very lilting to me, a fine spirit you have created

Lyn said...

What a perfect storm you've conjured here...of course I've got Sandy ( romance too) on my mind!

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Paint some love across the sky - such a great line!

Anonymous said...

Bellissimo.....!

Rebecca said...

What a lovely write and a nice first one that I read coming here!

Bee's Blog said...

Perfectly captured.