You stood for lorn against the wall
in the age of water and oils.
Saw time expand, mellow and grand
as you 'tocked your outer toils.
Speechless, though a talking point
to everyone who entered.
Mahogany with golden trim
gracefully you tenured.
A solid base that held you still
proudly and erect.
Yet ticked away your own demise
oblique, willful neglect.
For all the eyes you catered for
and all the ears that listened.
Anointed with a soothing base
denied your right to glisten.
For who cares for a time piece
that calls past Centuries?
Not quite fitting in a plan
with adequate degree
You stood there proudly serving
till the young hereditary
Chose digital and lazer beams
domestical contrary.
Alas you wait with artifact
collections in the attic.
To be destroyed, nil and void,
non-aristocratic.
Farewell my timeless beauty,
finite in its clutch.
Oh, the stories you could tell
without hands or Newtons touch
11 comments:
What a great take on the prompt--I love your descriptions here.
This was amazing! A timeless timepiece-I like that idea. :)
I love how you used time references as expressions like you've "Tocked out" very very clever!
Tick tock ... you rock!
Ladies - you are too kind and it's about time I told you so.....!
This is so sad...
Loved it.
And thanks for your comment on mine. Much appreciated.
Hey Lena I forgot to tell you earlier what ever you did to the Magpie pic is amazing!!! just gorgeous!
Excellent. I enjoyed the rhyme pattern here. Well done.
Timeless timepiece... standing erect. Truly beautiful piece of time!
I agree with Willow...
stunning imagery.
glad to discover your poetry talent
today.
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