tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post7539866645424039289..comments2023-12-11T10:28:14.840+00:00Comments on * What Lena Leaves *: Shot To PiecesHelenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-51508466727991179512011-09-11T13:19:42.960+01:002011-09-11T13:19:42.960+01:00Beautiful use of rhyming couplets.Beautiful use of rhyming couplets.Jack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-75343734772154910222011-09-10T03:27:04.025+01:002011-09-10T03:27:04.025+01:00I like this, Lena. Very melodic and the rhyme sche...I like this, Lena. Very melodic and the rhyme scheme is awesome.<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/09/he-was-a-ford-man-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-15733179844728219362011-09-08T08:52:41.663+01:002011-09-08T08:52:41.663+01:00Internal rhymes to convey a solemn message earn a ...Internal rhymes to convey a solemn message earn a big tick from me.Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-78131595638396906052011-09-08T07:22:36.342+01:002011-09-08T07:22:36.342+01:00Ouch!that was harsh reality...
I liked how you hav...Ouch!that was harsh reality...<br />I liked how you have weaved words with emotions!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-81879617699055264422011-09-08T07:18:10.687+01:002011-09-08T07:18:10.687+01:00A great interpretation of the picture, and an inte...A great interpretation of the picture, and an interesting poem.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-38411556921879396912011-09-08T01:45:17.266+01:002011-09-08T01:45:17.266+01:00Nice take!
JJrod'zNice take!<br /><br />JJrod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-60371559451880289072011-09-07T21:58:50.044+01:002011-09-07T21:58:50.044+01:00Lovely rhymes and internal rhymes in your forlorn ...Lovely rhymes and internal rhymes in your forlorn poem.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-64561130981762656612011-09-07T21:03:24.256+01:002011-09-07T21:03:24.256+01:00Richard - you're spot on. In amongst all the g...Richard - you're spot on. In amongst all the greed and wealth, there are still people starving.<br /><br />Nicholas - thank you. It was sad to walk 'The Fermer's Chase' (the name the public road splitting his fields was coined by locals) and see it so bare. The tookulooks (Scottish vernacular for 'hens') were fairly friendly, too. I never thought I'd ever write a poem about it 30 years on! That's the magic of Magpie's!<br /><br />Gautami - thanks for visiting. I'll call on you shortly....<br /><br />Helen - Thank you.....local businesses being swallowed by big-wigs. It's sad but a sad fact of living now.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-80703517247045216682011-09-07T21:00:59.653+01:002011-09-07T21:00:59.653+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-80775163562584804202011-09-07T20:47:40.053+01:002011-09-07T20:47:40.053+01:00You poem is perfect! One of my favorites .... it ...You poem is perfect! One of my favorites .... it happened to my grandparents too .. the Eagan Farm.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-27806687850822350822011-09-07T12:24:41.757+01:002011-09-07T12:24:41.757+01:00Wonderful piece!
hitching a ride in rusted trails...Wonderful piece!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/09/hitching-ride-in-rusted-trails.html" rel="nofollow">hitching a ride in rusted trails</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-10762674172302465052011-09-07T10:19:01.019+01:002011-09-07T10:19:01.019+01:00Lena, the picture inspired me to rhyme also, this ...Lena, the picture inspired me to rhyme also, this week. It was a bitter seed of a picture that prompted the thorny sprouts of your poetry... Sad but realistic.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-38276346683857353732011-09-06T23:49:42.898+01:002011-09-06T23:49:42.898+01:00Hello, Lena. That sad fact is the earth does not p...Hello, Lena. That sad fact is the earth does not produce enough food to feed today's population, and the population continues growing.ariverflowsbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02183454403933581280noreply@blogger.com