tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post3935350822192161363..comments2023-12-11T10:28:14.840+00:00Comments on * What Lena Leaves *: Sweet InversionHelenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-56881936415560574962011-09-30T09:29:38.361+01:002011-09-30T09:29:38.361+01:00Loverly rhythm indeed - energy rushing through. G...Loverly rhythm indeed - energy rushing through. Great write.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-78100961043617506302011-09-28T23:19:23.691+01:002011-09-28T23:19:23.691+01:00Your poem captures the energy of the elements very...Your poem captures the energy of the elements very well and the rhyme and rhythm evoke the falling rain. Lovely!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-51988252391695525112011-09-27T21:39:49.073+01:002011-09-27T21:39:49.073+01:00Brain - ah thanks - always the gent.
Martin - tha...Brain - ah thanks - always the gent.<br /><br />Martin - thank you.<br /><br />Roy - and a-thanka-you-too!<br /><br />Tess - Out loud? Wow!<br /><br />Helen - Thank you so much. I hate the sound of my 'speaking' voice but tolerate it more if I sing. <br /><br />Words - I struggled with this one, but still managed somehow to come up with yet another repetitive rhyme....lol<br /><br />Thingy - you is very kind, you is very kind indeed.....!<br /><br />Shers - thanks. I thought I'd a bit of animation to this weeks' entry.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-92055062659463847692011-09-26T23:44:32.470+01:002011-09-26T23:44:32.470+01:00"collects the screams among the woes." H..."collects the screams among the woes." Holy cow, I love it.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-4955554469226054452011-09-26T20:49:57.997+01:002011-09-26T20:49:57.997+01:00you've such a knack with rhyming and rhythm!you've such a knack with rhyming and rhythm!Words A Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04423263654771820182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-59610924888807744902011-09-26T20:29:33.729+01:002011-09-26T20:29:33.729+01:00OH .. I would LOVE to hear you read this aloud!!!OH .. I would LOVE to hear you read this aloud!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-68816086921259851682011-09-26T20:01:32.644+01:002011-09-26T20:01:32.644+01:00Delicious rhythm and flow...sounds wonderful...I h...Delicious rhythm and flow...sounds wonderful...I had to read it out loud...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-89163807112610997422011-09-26T19:07:02.923+01:002011-09-26T19:07:02.923+01:00Nicely done.Nicely done.Roy Schulzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03574135323022831091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-68429232062837368622011-09-26T18:54:31.569+01:002011-09-26T18:54:31.569+01:00"...daylight's darkest caches,
released i..."...daylight's darkest caches,<br />released in violent blows" - the essence of a storm. Nice one.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-87138965543061156982011-09-26T18:28:12.903+01:002011-09-26T18:28:12.903+01:00nice...this has a wicked flow to it...i love the f...nice...this has a wicked flow to it...i love the full fury of a storm and stand in wonder at it...andi love the smell once it passes...nicely penned...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com