tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post186452382528971496..comments2023-12-11T10:28:14.840+00:00Comments on * What Lena Leaves *: Dust To A WidowHelenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-20006935489780004752014-04-17T16:50:08.169+01:002014-04-17T16:50:08.169+01:00I can feel it--great job!I can feel it--great job!~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-66265580631423388822014-04-10T19:56:37.461+01:002014-04-10T19:56:37.461+01:00Lovely and lyrical as always...Lovely and lyrical as always...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-12874849915597167182014-04-10T16:44:02.928+01:002014-04-10T16:44:02.928+01:00Oh yeah. I like this one!
=)Oh yeah. I like this one!<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-89924790647111405712014-04-09T04:30:30.190+01:002014-04-09T04:30:30.190+01:00Ah, this made me want to cry. You wrote this so b...Ah, this made me want to cry. You wrote this so beautifully. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-1873255937466391592014-04-08T17:35:41.929+01:002014-04-08T17:35:41.929+01:00beautiful....beautiful....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-9573897608847640992014-04-08T03:07:01.889+01:002014-04-08T03:07:01.889+01:00This is heart touching..This is heart touching..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-15895025659301722342014-04-07T22:29:36.930+01:002014-04-07T22:29:36.930+01:00Hi, thanks for the goldfish story. You 'got th...Hi, thanks for the goldfish story. You 'got the presence' of a 'dearly departed' well. For a giggle have a look at this true story.<br />http://staffordray.blogspot.com.au/search?q=nailsStafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-90976552668345278232014-04-07T19:06:18.029+01:002014-04-07T19:06:18.029+01:00aaah...:-)♥aaah...:-)♥Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-32618451103895462542014-04-07T17:28:31.403+01:002014-04-07T17:28:31.403+01:00Whenever we see the sunbeams breaking through the ...Whenever we see the sunbeams breaking through the clouds, we think of it as our loved ones smiling down on us from the heavens. This reminded me so much of that. Lovely.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-40532763562109438452014-04-07T15:57:20.742+01:002014-04-07T15:57:20.742+01:00Beautiful and sad at the exact same time...Beautiful and sad at the exact same time...Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-47856843316501004602014-04-07T13:19:07.061+01:002014-04-07T13:19:07.061+01:00i'm always in awe of poets who rhyme; good one...i'm always in awe of poets who rhyme; good one<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-46674607765051708632014-04-07T02:57:19.374+01:002014-04-07T02:57:19.374+01:00Beautiful... and sad. Beautiful... and sad. Steven Cainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00251773690801692907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-28855467896802009192014-04-07T02:13:53.492+01:002014-04-07T02:13:53.492+01:00I especially like the 3rd stanza. I especially like the 3rd stanza. M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-56963956399229204362014-04-07T01:26:41.035+01:002014-04-07T01:26:41.035+01:00This is stunning. Emotionally evocative, full of s...This is stunning. Emotionally evocative, full of sensory engagement. Not a single word need change....it is spectacular as it is.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-643654001214633752014-04-06T23:15:03.187+01:002014-04-06T23:15:03.187+01:00I'd drop this stanza completely or change the ...I'd drop this stanza completely or change the last 2 lines in it. It's a beautiful poem so don't get me wrong! This is the only rough spot in your poem. No need to change anything else! I love it!<br />"Inhaling strongly, then closing eyes tight<br />comforted vision as day turns to night<br />An all around piece of him left in the flat<br />no other feet wiped on their coir welcome mat"Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-26505920243501378482014-04-06T21:43:48.544+01:002014-04-06T21:43:48.544+01:00This is beautiful!This is beautiful!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-46167955204971177902014-04-06T21:20:07.331+01:002014-04-06T21:20:07.331+01:00it's fine just the way it is.it's fine just the way it is.anne marie in phillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11765140782182605141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3413648554069885442.post-91652641848412367922014-04-06T20:56:00.710+01:002014-04-06T20:56:00.710+01:00closure;
the promise of life comes full circle and...closure;<br />the promise of life comes full circle and we move on 'til our turn in the urn.<br /><br />relhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.com